I wrote a song.. opinions?

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Hey everyone :)

I haven't written a song in a long time, but just recently I felt really inspired to do so..

I know it isn't quite finished and it isn't the best of videos.. but please can you tell me what you think about my song? It would mean a lot to me :)


Thank you so much
Jelaca
 
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Wow ! You are a very talented lady ! loved it ! Is this your profession ?
 
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mo1905 said:
Wow ! You are a very talented lady ! loved it ! Is this your profession ?
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Thank you so much everyone, I really appreciate it! It isn't my profession, I used to sing at gigs, but I lost a lot of my passion for it (I guess when I auditioned for The X Factor :p) and only now has it come back :D
 
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Wow!!! Amazing!!! What year were you on x factor I think I remember you from 2 years ago??
 
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Wow!!! Amazing!!! What year were you on x factor I think I remember you from 2 years ago??
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I was on two years ago! Maybe we were in the que together :p
Thanks again everyone, you are all so kind!
 
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Sounds great Jelaca, told you before that you have a good voice :)

When I played guitar (badly I might add) I couldn't tune by ear, I used a Korg Guitar Tuner which were always reliable and not too badly priced.
 
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Dzialo said:
If you go auditioning I'll create a "Team Jelaca" ;):p
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Haha thank you :p There were auditions close to my town yesterday, but I didn't audition! So I will just have to keep doing my videos!

noblehead said:
Sounds great Jelaca, told you before that you have a good voice :)

When I played guitar (badly I might add) I couldn't tune by ear, I used a Korg Guitar Tuner which were always reliable and not too badly priced.
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Thank you for this! I will have a look into it and that might help me for my next video! I am very grateful :)
 
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Hi Jelaca,
My daughter was sitting not to far from me as I listened to your song, within 4 seconds she said "thats nice"

So you have 2 votes from me, great voice and a lovely talent :singing: :):)
 
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izzzi said:
Hi Jelaca,
My daughter was sitting not to far from me as I listened to your song, within 4 seconds she said "thats nice"

So you have 2 votes from me, great voice and a lovely talent :singing: :):)
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Thank you!! I am so glad and grateful that you both liked it :D means a lot!
 
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Nice..

I'd say work on a "middle eight" & double chorus at the end..?
 
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Great song and great voice! I really enjoyed it.
 
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Very nice!
Music is my big thing ... always has been.
I'm an old hippy and have spent very little time watching telly over the years but a lot of time listening to music at home and at concerts.
I play a little bit.
I sing a little too but the best compliment I ever got was ... you sound like a Dalek!
I've messed about with some experimental stuff and got into the engineering side of it as a hobby at home in the shed.
Play a short guitar piece and then edit it on pc and loop it distort it add sound effects etc.
Bash a pan with a pencil or a mallet ... use a book as a drum ... play a little keyboard stuff and drums and mess with it till it sounds huge and far more complicated than it ever really was.
Thought I might get round to creating short pieces for adverts news bulletins and stuff but never finished a piece.
Please feel free to shout at me if you think I'm hijacking your lovely thread ... not my intention ... might be quite a few on here who bash out a tune now and then is all I was thinking.
Heres some of my stuff from about eight years ago ... warning ... most of it just aint normal!!!
First track is a mate of mine singing a song he wrote.
http://www.reverbnation.com/jackbisreallyjoey/songs
 
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Jelaca said:
Hey everyone :)

I haven't written a song in a long time, but just recently I felt really inspired to do so..

I know it isn't quite finished and it isn't the best of videos.. but please can you tell me what you think about my song? It would mean a lot to me :)


Thank you so much
Jelaca
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I'm Ronnie S on your tube ...keep 'em coming.
 
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