LastRoloT2
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How about this one.Well, I appreciate the work that has gone into this poem but in my opinion it is more likely to reinforce stereotypes than anything else.
Now that one I like, far more realistic!How about this one.
"Diabetes—a poem
Drinking a lot
Peeing a lot
Is it my body?
Or the weather is hot?
Go to the doctor, people say
Maybe I can wait another day
I don’t like hospitals anyway
But still need to know if I am okay
So, it seems that my pancreas is lazy
Don’t say diabetes, it drives me crazy. Sugar diabetes, I detest you You made my vision and life hazy
Testing blood sugar is not fun
Day after day, I’m never done
How to know what to eat?
While my sugars continue to jump and run
Feeling locked, maybe I am “low ”
And when “high” I’ m tired and slow
My beta cells are on strike
They permanently cut the insulin flow
Tell me pharmacist: is this number a price or a date?
Paying for insulin, something I hate
So expensive, and no one cares
Diabetes, no doubt, is a pricey fate
Insulin pumps can talk to iPhone
Continuous sensors can detect the ketone. If the technology is so advanced Why couldn’t it make a beta cell clone?
Despite a diagnosis harsh and dure
I remain positively sure
Science will concur the despair
And one day we will have a CURE"
https://diabetesvoice.org/en/advocating-for-diabetes/diabetes-awareness-through-poetry/
Or maybe this one
"
Pain in my feet
With pincushion fingers.
Blurred double vision,
Exhaustion that lingers.
I thought it was fat,
That I had to avoid.
Turns out it was sugar,
No, I'm not paranoid.
Thirsty? Yes, always.
Tired? Exercise.
Hungry? Can't eat,
Gained another full size.
Blood sugar up,
Blood sugar down.
Feels both the same,
And my heart still pounds.
The pills aren't a cure,
Insulin either,
A meter to measure
My angry blood fever.
No eating for fun,
No ice cream for me,
Have I seen the last sunrise
That I'll ever see?
My doctor say's 'Manage'
My friends all just worry,
Seems I'm living my life
In one **** big hurry.
It’s a lonely disease
And it fogs up my brain,
Drains all my strength,
And then, there's the pain.
So chop off my feet,
And I'll get a Rascal,
This diabetic life,
It's more than a hassle."
Sandra Osborne
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/diabetes/
Poems are to long to read without a space between verses or what ever they are called.
Here's some diabetic haiku's I picked up in a quick trawl of Google.
Diabetes meds
Can make us feel rather sick
Still have to take them
How much insulin?
Let me count carbohydrates
In that plate of food
My meter is broken
That must be the reason that
My glucose is twelve
Shiver shake tremble
Mind gone awry and hungry
Hypoglycaemic
Edit: One to many silly bulls in one of them.
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