Biology but reads like one of those 'xxx for Dummies'.Incredibly oversimplified to the point of being wrong.
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Except that T1 isn't typically occurring early in life, with half or so newly diagnosed being grown ups.Inserting the word 'typically' would improve the sentence. You could write to the publishers suggesting that so they consider it for the next edition.
Yes, but 'early in life' doesn't just mean children, it includes young adults as well, in which case 'typically' would be correct.Except that T1 isn't typically occurring early in life, with half or so newly diagnosed being grown ups.
I agree that it would improve the sentence by a little but if you're going to write to the publishers I'd suggest something that's actually right...