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pdmjoker

pdmjoker

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Type of diabetes
Prediabetes
Treatment type
Diet only
There once was a girl from Australia
Who went to a dance dressed as a dahlia
But as the petals unfurled
It was clear to the world
That the dress, as a dress, was a failure!

:pompous:

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The poor girl just couldn't win -
Underneath her dress was all pink skin
There'dve been much less talk
If she'd added a stalk
And worn some green garments toes to chin...
 
Robbity said:
The poor girl just couldn't win -
Underneath her dress was all pink skin
There'dve been much less talk
If she'd added a stalk
And worn some green garments toes to chin...
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Good one! I've tweaked what you wrote - I thought it worthy and hope you don't mind:

The poor girl just couldn't win -
Under her dress was all pink skin
There would've been less talk
If she'd added a stalk -
Some green garments from toes to chin​

Edit: corrected typo
 
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No I don't mind at all. I typed it more or less as it came into my head, so a little refining was worth it!
 
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